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I've read 100+ mangas, 1000+ books, and made 10000+ forum posts in response to interesting ideas and opinions... My opinion here is that your work is HIGHLY-original, and because I loved the ending so much I just have to give you my congratulations! This is the most satisfying narrative that I have read in years. The storyline is SO unique, the character-development resonates with me (I am always suspicious of other people, constantly trying to sweet-talk them into ignoring me), and the intrigue kept me checking for the latest chapter! I like how the main character is considerate (both in choosing a course of action, and in not harming anyone), and felt her success at the end. It is a very positive take on this genre of fiction, and while the story could have been more emotional, or more tragic (by making her escape a failure)... I personally enjoyed this ending, and your level of detail when describing people and settings was enough to keep me interested yet still identify with the setting. Again - VERY unique story! Very.
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